Front Cover:

My final second page (the scanner cut off the edge):



I found it difficult to make clear what was the title of the newspaper ("Local Life") and what the the headline of the cover story ("Doing it in a community fashion"). To make it clearer I decided to have a red arrow and line behind the words "Local Life", I think this was a good idea as the name now stands out and I am going to used this effect again in both my poster and website, as a logo for the Newspaper, so audience will recognise the links and realise all three of the things are working together.
As my design brief if to create a new newspaper I think it's important to make it known the newspaper is new, and the reader know to look for it in the future. Therefore I decided to have the bottom section of the newspaper advertising subscribing to the newspaper as a way to attract loyal readers early on. Also i added the text "the new voice of alveston" on top of a read strip. I made this red as it stands out and link to colours used in the title giving my newspaper its own familiar look. Stating that its new in my opinion would create curiosity for people seeing the newspaper in the shop as they know this newspaper is not like other newspapers they might read.
I like the happy feeling this photo gives as
Georgina is smiling, however I feel the smile look too fake, when I'm looking for a more natural style.
Out of all the photo of Georgina I think her facial expression is best in this photo, I think the smile work really well and gives the photo a positive feel.
I think this photo needs brighter lighting, as it is fairly dark and I'd like the photo to stand out more, but I could edit this is a decide to use this photo so it shouldn't be much of an issue
I am going to look on the "Evening Post" website, on order to give me more ideas about what what is going on in my local community, and how they use more world stories with a local spin off. Heres a link to the website http://www.thisisbristol.co.uk/.
Fitting this story to narrative theory's: